Friday, December 23, 2011

Chapter 1: First Kiss...

WARNING: The following story is for Mature Audiences for Language, Content & Adult Situations. Reader Discretion is Advised.

Author's Notes: This Fictional Story and Characters, Jin and Jasmine, and all other Characters are Exclusively Copyright Protected and the Property of Robert Darrien... Enjoy!!!

by Robert Darrien


He leaned in close to her and sensually kissed her lips for the first time. They both closed their eyes and let their other senses guide them. The fragrance she wore was so sweet and intoxicating. It had to be ‘Cherry Blossom’. In combination with the sweet taste of the cherry lip gloss that she had on, his body could not help but react.

“She had impeccable taste,” he thought.

He passionately started kissing her longer and deeper as he could feel her body reacting to his touch. He teased her lips with his lips as each touch added to an ever growing yearning from deep inside her. She started pulling in closer toward him and started to open her mouth ever so slightly. He could feel her succumbing to the moment with him and playfully caressed the tip of her tongue with his. She followed his lead and responded by doing the same. He started to intertwine his tongue with hers and started stroking the side of her tongue, then the top, then the side, then the bottom, in a circular kind of motion.

“Where did he learn how to do this,” she thought.

Jasmine followed his lead and returned the favor. Their tongues danced passionately as each subtle movement excited their senses and slowly brought out the raw powerful instinctual sides in each of them. With each stroke of his tongue, he sent her beyond the limit of her expectations and sent tingling sensations ripping throughout her body. Wave after wave of overwhelming, unrelenting jolts of electricity sent shivers down her spine. She could feel herself losing control... and she liked it. At that moment, he pulled away from their embrace and she opened her eyes.

“Why did you stop,” she thought as she looked at him curiously.

Jin had a smile on his face as he was only a few inches away from her. She tried to move in close to kiss him but he pulled back a little bit just to tease her. Then suddenly, he came in and passionately fulfilled the need that she so longed to be desired at that moment. He kissed her deeply… slowly… sensually, like a real woman should be kissed by a real man. She had never been teased like this before but for some reason, the way he did it, she did not seem to mind. There was something about him. The caring, protective, strong, take-your-time, nonchalant, sweet, sensual, passionate way of how he did things started to make her body quiver at the thought of his touch and even at the smooth, soothing, caring, sound of his voice. He pulled back from her seductive lips and looked at her and smiled.

“You are so beautiful,” Jin said as he looked at her beautiful, caring dark brown eyes.

“I had a really good time tonight,” she said blushing and smiling as she looked over from the passenger seat of his car.

As their eyes met, Jasmine started to get lost in his beautiful, dark brown eyes. This was the first time that she felt a connection with someone that made her mind race and body yearn for more during the first date. She did not want it to end. Most dates she had been on before, the man was really aggressive and trying to get some, but this time things were different. He was a breath of fresh air and truly refreshing.

“Me too, we should do it again,” he said as he caressed her arm with the tips of his fingers.

“I don’t know if you noticed, but this is my first time I’ve ever been on a date with an Asian guy,” Jasmine said in a shy and kind of embarrassed way.

“Well, what do you think,” Jin asked with smile and curious look on his face.

“I was really cautious at first because I didn’t know that Asian Men would ever date a Black Woman like me,” she said smiling at him.

“I can’t speak for all Asian Men but all I know is that I like getting to know you as a person, your personality, likes and dislikes, goals and ambitions, it just happens to be that you are an incredibly, beautiful Black Woman inside and out,” he said.

“You really think I’m beautiful,” Jasmine asked.

“Of course I do, inside and out,” Jin said as he looked her in her eyes.

“What do you like about me,” she asked...



>>>>>TO BE CONTINUED...???

25 comments:

  1. Really good job. Not just saying that. I love to read. Left me wanting more. Can't wait until the next installment.

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  2. >>>> @creoleprincess89 Thank you!!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read some of my work and leaving a comment. Hope I can count on your on-going support and thoughtful ideas... :)

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  3. Wow!!! That's awesome story! This story made me inspired. I love it!!! ♥. I can't wait to read next one coming soon. Keep it up and keep up good work! *THUMB UP* :-D

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  4. >>>>> @Cappy Thank you!!! I really appreciate your thoughts and ideas. Hope I can count on your feedback and support on my future works. :)

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  5. A very lovely start, please continue. I'm anxiously waiting for more…..and it very refreshing to see a love connection (am/bw) from a man’s perspective. Kudos to you for stepping out and writing this beautiful beginning. I look forward to reading more of your work. Ha,‘Cherry Blossom’ one of my favorite summertime scents.....

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  6. Beautiful story and a wonderful read. Keep it coming!

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  7. >>>>> @LadyOrchid Thank you!!! It really means a lot. Your support and encouragement helps push me forward. :)

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  8. >>>>> @Melly Mel aka The Brooklynista Thank you!!! I value your thoughts and ideas. I was going by Readers comments and reaction to the story to see if I should continue with it. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this part. :)

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  9. This is Brittney_Canna, I've already told you that I really enjoyed this story, but I will tell you again. :) You are a very good writer and this story was very interesting to read, from beginning to the end. Keep writing! :)

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  10. Lovely start. Keep going. Seriously.

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  11. >>>>> @Pandaninja Thank you Brittney!!! It really means a lot. Hope I can count on your on-going support. Thank you for the Great Feedback!!! :)

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  12. >>>>> @Amaya Thank you!!! Your guidance and kind words are invaluable. Thank you for commenting and helping me push forward. :)

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  13. I agree with what everyone else said I can't wait for the next installment.

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  14. It's so refreshing to see an Asian male write about AMBW relations. Looking forward to your next installment.

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  15. Wow! This is great! I was all in and then it said "to be continued". Lol.
    Looking forward to reading more.

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  16. Wow, great start. way to set very thing up. really pull me into the story. Can't wait for read the next section. :D

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  17. Hey this is Akilah! I have to agree with Mari, you're off to a great start with the story. Great introductory visuals, sensual tone and good dialogue. I can already tell your story is going to be really good, as long as you keep the momentum up! I'm captivated by your description of the characters. You really help the reader visualize what's going on and how the characters are feeling in that moment. Keep up the good work!! Looking forward to the next installment!

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  18. Wow, I love how you explain the emotions they were feeling during their embrace. I was almost feeling like Jasmine there because of how well it was written. Well I'm off to the next chpt.!

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  19. Overall a great story! I absolutely loved the part when Jin reiterated the fact he liked her inside and out, that was super cute!:)

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  20. “Where did he learn how to do this,” she thought.
    i have the same question too JASMINE i think i want to date Jin too.wait maybe he have a twin bother with the same brain :)...... Jamisne is a LUCKY GIRL....

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  21. Wow..Great read looking forward to adding this to my collection of books to read. Awesome! For once a story of getting to know...:)

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  22. I love to read and its refreshing to see that good writers still do exist. It left me wanting more and I'm a fan. I will be reading more and don't change your writing style :-)

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