Monday, April 16, 2012

Chapter 4: Goodnight...???

WARNING: The following story is for Mature Audiences for Language, Content & Adult Situations. Reader Discretion is Advised.

Author's Notes: This Fictional Story and Characters, Jin and Jasmine, and all other Characters are Exclusively Copyright Protected and the Property of Robert Darrien... Enjoy!!!

by Robert Darrien

As the police sirens and lights disappeared in the distance, Jasmine couldn’t help but look at Jin while his eyes were focused securely at the cop car speeding down the road. He looked so strong and confident. She was still apparently shaken up by the whole situation, but with him there, she felt protected and safe.

“Are you okay,” he asked Jasmine in a concerned tone.

“I’m fine,” she replied in an attempt to act like she was okay.

“I’m sorry Jasmine. I tried my best to remain calm and not make the situation worse but as soon as that guy started looking at you, touching you, and saying those things. I couldn’t stand it. I had to do anything to get those cops attention off of you and focus it on me. I’m sorry,” he said looking at her then turning away.

Jin felt powerless and helpless that he couldn’t do anything. What’s worse was that he wasn’t sure how Jasmine was feeling. Was she upset at him for not speaking up sooner? Was she proud that he stood up for her? A moment of silence and confusion lingered in the air.

Suddenly, Jasmine placed her hand in his and squeezed.

“Thank you,” she said in a gentle, sweet, caring tone.

She knew Jin was trying to protect her and what he just said confirmed it. She wanted to console him and support him knowing how hard it was for him to stand up against those crooked cops. She wanted to show him that she understood and appreciated what he did. She pulled him forward as they both walked toward her house in comfortable silence. Jasmine couldn’t help but smile and feel how lucky she was to find someone like him. Just the thought made her heart race.

As they approached the front door, Jasmine said, “I had a great time. Can I ask you a question?”


“I’ve seen and heard stuff like that happening, but I’ve never actually been in a situation like that. Were you scared? ”

“Honestly, I don’t know. I had a bad feeling about how those cops were acting. I always thought cops were meant to protect and serve but the way that one cop was talking and looking at you. I had to do something… anything…”

“Nobody’s ever stood up for me like that before, thank you,” she said as she looked into his eyes.

“You don’t have to thank me, I’m sure anyone would have done the same.”

As Jasmine smiled she asked, “Were you scared that they were gonna arrest you?”

He replied with a smirk, “Let’s both be glad that it didn’t get to that point.”

“That would be a hard story to explain to my parents,” she said then laughed.

“I hope I don’t get you into too much trouble. You know, being out so late and the cops stopping us in front of your house.”

“It’s okay. My parents aren’t home for the weekend,” she said as she gave Jin a suggestive look and took his hand leading him toward the front door. “Do you want to come in?”

Jin then took her hands and wrapped them around the back of his neck as he gently pushed her back against the door and kissed her sweet sensual lips with heartfelt passion and desire. Their lips and tongues caressed each other and aroused the burning desire swelling from deep inside each of them. He teased her with each caressing movement of his tongue. Suddenly, he broke their lips’ embrace.

“I don’t think it’s a good idea for me to come in,” he replied.

“Are you sure,” she asked.

“Yeah. I really like you Jasmine. Since this is our first official date, I feel like I’d be rushing you and it wouldn’t be right. Besides, we’ll have plenty of opportunities and I want us to enjoy getting to know each other,” he said as he looked into her eyes.

“Okay,” she said in a disappointed but understanding tone.

She never met anyone who took her thoughts into consideration like that before. It was a breath of fresh air and a welcome change from the previous guys she’s dated. He was different in a good kind of way. She quickly got over her disappointment as she looked in his eyes.

“Well, I have to get going then,” he said as he leaned in for one last kiss of the night.

She closed her eyes as their lips touched. It was slow, soft, and sensual. With each seductive movement of the tip of his tongue caressing hers, tingling sensations rippled through her body starting from the lower back of her spine spreading all the way to her toes and fingertips. As his lips slowly pulled away, she leaned forward yearning for more. She then opened her eyes and saw him looking back into hers. He smiled for a moment then turned and walked down the sidewalk toward his car.

As he opened the door to his car, she yelled out, “Call me when you get home so I know you made it home alright.”

“Okay, I got you,” he shouted back.

He started his car and waved as he drove off. She waved back and opened the front door. Still smiling and excited, she immediately ran upstairs to her room and got ready for bed. Her mind was racing. Was I too forward? Should I have kissed him? Should I have invited him in? Did I come off too easy? She had so many questions running through her head.

Jasmine was finally ready for bed but she couldn’t go to sleep. She laid in bed wondering what he was doing and anticipating his call. As she laid there wondering, she started to imagine what it would be like if he was laying next to her slowly caressing her body with his fingertips. Tracing his fingertips ever so slightly up and down her arms then down her thighs as he started kissing on her neck. Her body was pulsing, yearning for his touch so bad that she placed the pillow between her thighs. She started twisting her body. Grabbing... pushing... and pulling. Slowly losing herself in the moment as her imagination was running wild.

Suddenly, her phone started ringing. She jumped up and answered immediately.

In her most soft, seductive voice, "Hello?"

"Hey Baby, I know it's been months since we've talked but I missed you...," said the raspy man's voice on the phone.



  1. The imagery is awesome. You keep pulling me into the story further with every new chapter. Its been awhile since I have been this interested in a story. Thanks. You are reminding why I wanted to be an author in the first place. Keep up the good work. By the way this is Elizabeth Fields from facebook.

    1. Thank you Elizabeth!!!!! You are one of the reasons why I keep going. I truly appreciate your comments and insight. Hope you enjoyed it... :)

    2. OMG, this is getting good!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing a great job, keep it up!!! This is Danelle Walker from fb.

    3. Thank you Danelle!!!! It really means a lot. I'm hoping I can count on your on-going support and feedback. :)

  2. I feel you're really getting into this story. There's adefinite growth in your writing style.

    1. Thank you Ankhesen!!! I feel that I am growing and putting more depth into the story line as well. :)

  3. Whew!! This is a great story!
    Can't wait to read more!

  4. Omg this is getting better and better.

    As for the raspy voice, I was like mmm who is that.

    Cant wait for the next chapter.

    Keep it up!!!

  5. I think I found the perfect gentleman. I would have to say, he handled that situation perfectly. Jin is my kinda man :-)